Your William Shakespeare crafted clever lines with hidden meanings, like, “All the world’s a stage.” It’s as if he had insight into my five-act play on my pet subject, humanity.
Act One (The Exposition): Earth is a Garden of Eden. An unremarkable troop of apes descends from the trees and totters about on two legs, foraging on the African savannah.
These are the opening paragraphs from A Five-Act Play on Humanity, a short story I shared on the Tall And True writers’ website in October 2024.
Please note: The Story Insight below contains spoilers.
Story Insight
I wrote A Five-Act Play on Humanity for the October 2024 Furious Fiction, run by the Australian Writers’ Centre. The brief was your story must:
- Take place in some kind of THEATRE.
- Include somebody SHOUTING.
- Contain the words UNCOMFORTABLE, RECORD and SHRINK.
Under the heading “All the World’s a Stage”, the Writers’ Centre further explained:
This month, we’re asking you to set your story in a specific location — a theatre! The word literally means a “place for viewing” — making it ideal for telling a visual story for your reader.
An Omnipotent Playwright
As soon as I read “All the World’s a Stage”, I thought of Shakespeare’s immortal line and how the world could be the literal theatre or “place for viewing” in my story. In that case, I needed an omnipotent playwright and director and a structure for the play/story.
A traditional three-act play with a beginning, middle and end seemed too short, even for a 500-word Furious Fiction story. Then I read about five-act plays on the MasterClass website and knew I had my stage, narrator, characters, structure and story!
The Stage is Ours
I enjoyed spending the weekend writing A Five-Act Play on Humanity and was pleased to learn the Furious Fiction judges longlisted it for October.
I tried expanding it for another writing competition, where the stories could be between 1500 and 3000 words.
However, partway into the rewrite, I realised that the extra words diluted the story and its message. So, instead, I made a few post-Furious Fiction edits (as I always do with my stories), respecting the original brief and word count limit, before sharing it on Tall And True.
I hope you like A Five-Act Play on Humanity. Remember, if it makes you feel uncomfortable, the stage is ours!
© 2024 Robert Fairhead
Thanks to Siggy Nowak for sharing the image of the amphitheatre on Pixabay.
N.B. You might like to read another of my omnipresent narrated stories, which I wrote for April 2024’s Not Quite Write Prize, You Have Been Warned.
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Welcome to the blog posts and selected writing of Robert Fairhead. A writer and editor at the Tall And True writers' website, Robert also writes and narrates episodes for the Tall And True Short Reads podcast. In addition, his book reviews and other writing have appeared in print and online media, and he's published several collections of short stories. Please see Robert's profile for further details.
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